The Craft of Screenwriting: Format and Related Issues

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5.0 The Craft of Screenwriting: Format and Related Issues

5.1 INTRODUCTION
       Most people who write original screenplays plan to sell them to
       somebody else, e.g. producers, who will then make the scripts into
       movies. With hundreds of scripts to read and evaluate, the
       prospective buyer may sometimes look for shortcuts -- ways to judge
       the potential quality of a screenplay without having to read the
       entire script. This is a simple fact of life when there are at
       least 100 scripts written for every script that gets sold and
       produced each year in the mainstream of American film.
       
       So, beginning writers are urged to follow various arbitrary, and
       seemingly capricious, guidelines of script format and presentation.
       Doing so pays off when the reader, with a single glance at a
       script, recognizes that its author has done his/her homework, and
       is serious about becoming part of the filmmaking team. By meeting
       that test, the screenplay has a better chance of getting a fair and
       thorough consideration, instead of being thrown into the discard
       pile immediately. The advice presented here is not intended to
       inhibit creativity. It is merely a description of the way things
       generally are in the industry.
       
       What are the "rules," then? They fall into two main categories:
       Page format, and presentation.
       
       Format has to do with things like margin settings, proper use of
       script elements; tab stops or placement of elements on the page,
       the size and typeface used to print the script; methods of
       continuing script elements from page to page; capitalization and
       punctuation; and so on.
       
       Presentation includes things like the contents of title pages,
       types of script covers, and methods of binding the screenplay pages
       together.
       
5.2    Page dimensions and paper type
       The misc.writing.screenplays newsgroup has users from around the
       world. However, this document will assume that users have access to
       U.S.-standard "letter-size" paper, which is 8.5 x 11 inches (216 by
       279 mm). The paper should be smooth, standard bond. Most laser
       printer papers nowadays come in 24-pound weight, but there are also
       many papers of a somewhat lighter (and thinner) 20-pound weight.
       There have been no reports in the newsgroup of problems when using
       paper in this weight range. Anything lighter or heavier should be
       avoided. (For writers outside the U.S., A4 paper is usually the
       standard. Some non-U.S. writers aiming at U.S. markets have
       reported success by writing on A4 paper but using U.S. margin
       settings, and copying the finished scripts onto "letter-size" paper
       upon arrival in the U.S., or doing so by mail order. Further detail
       goes beyond the scope of this document.)

5.3    Typeface
       The typeface used on spec screenplays is Courier, and the required
       size is 12 points high. Courier is a monospaced typeface, meaning
       that each character takes up the same amount of space from left to
       right. As a result, it is possible to precisely measure the number
       of characters that will fit in a given width of paper. The same is
       not true of typefaces like Times Roman, Helvetica, or others, in
       which narrow letters take up less space than wide letters.
       
       When a true Courier typeface is set to 12 points of height, it
       automatically requires one "Pica" or 1/10 of an inch of horizontal
       space on the page, and in most cases will require 1/6 of an inch of
       vertical space. 

       Note that computer software use the term "font" in place of the
       word "typeface," and this is somewhat of a misnomer. In any case,
       there is great discussion in the newsgroup about the common
       "Courier New" TrueType font appearing rather pale compared to other
       typefaces. No user has reported a script rejection on the basis of
       this font, but it still generates a lot of questions. Whether it is
       Courier New, Courier Old, or whatever, does not matter as long as
       it is some sort of Courier, with the size set at 12 points.
       
       The reason producers want consistently-sized type on submission
       screenplay drafts is because it usually results in a total page
       count that is useful in estimating the finished film's length. Of
       course there can be great variations, but the ballpark
       rule-of-thumb estimate is one minute of running time for each page
       of screenplay. If every screenwriter used a different typeface of a
       different size, this already-rough estimation process would become
       totally erratic. Remember, the writer's goal in following
       formatting guidelines is to make life easier for people who are
       reading the script and considering buying it.
       
5.4    Script elements defined
       Most traditional film screenplays are constructed of a small
       collection of element types: Sluglines, Action, Dialogue,
       Parenthetical, Character, Character Extension, Transition, and in
       some styles, a separate element for Shot description.
       
       Remember that a screenplay is a blueprint for the production of a
       movie, not an end in itself. For example, the primary reason
       sluglines exist is to help production managers count the number of
       different sets and locations required, and the number of scenes
       occurring at each of them. There are similar production-related
       reasons for many of the otherwise arbitrary conventions of the
       screenplay format.

5.4.1     SLUGLINE (SCENE HEADING)
          A single-line description of the location where a scene takes
          place, the time of day, and whether it takes place indoors or
          outdoors (interior or exterior).
5.4.2     ACTION (SCENE DESCRIPTION, DIRECTION)
          A narrative description of what the camera sees. An action
          paragraph is used to introduce and describe characters when they
          first appear, to tell what they do in the scene, to indicate
          special effects, and to a very limited extent, describe camera
          movement or placement if such description is required for the
          delivery of plot or story information. Clever use of scene
          description can also be very useful in setting mood.
5.4.3     CHARACTER or CHARACTER CUE
          The name of the character who is about to speak.
5.4.4     CHARACTER EXTENSION
          The addition of an abbreviation after the character's name, to
          indicate special production circumstances. Most common are
          (O.S.) for Offscreen, when the character speaking is present in
          the scene, but out of range of the camera; and (V.O.) for
          Voiceover, when the character speaking is not in the scene at
          all, but dubbed into the soundtrack, as in the case of a
          narrator.
5.4.5     PARENTHETICAL (PERSONAL DIRECTION)
          A description of the way in which the character delivers the
          dialogue that follows. The parenthetical is also sometimes used
          in place of a line of action description. Most experts advise
          only minimal use of parenthetical direction. Professional
          directors and actors generally will not require help from the
          screenwriter to interpret their roles, and unnecessary
          parentheticals simply add clutter to the page, which should be
          avoided.
5.4.6     DIALOGUE
          The words spoken (or sounds made) by a character.
5.4.7     TRANSITION
          A very short description of the way the current scene ends, and
          the next scene begins. Most scenes in most movies end with a
          straight cut, and therefore many writers do not indicate
          transitions in their scripts at all. Other writers indicate only
          those transitions that are not cuts. The most common examples
          are "DISSOLVE TO:" and less commonly "WIPE TO:". The opening
          "FADE IN:" and the closing "FADE OUT." or "FADE TO BLACK." are
          technically transitions, also.
5.4.8     SHOT DESCRIPTION
          In recent years there has been a trend in which the writer may
          separate a single word, or short phrase, in upper case on the
          left margin, with double spaces above and below it, and with
          action description often following. Often this is a way the
          writer "cheats" a camera direction into the script without
          mentioning the camera, but it is also used as a sort of visual
          punctuation on the page to add white space. In any case it is
          very easy to misuse. Beginning writers are urged to read
          produced screenplays to see how professionals have handled this
          technique previously.

5.5    Margins, tab settings, etc.
       Greg Beal, of the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences
       Foundation, created a web page on the Academy's website with
       guidelines for script formatting, at http://www.oscars.org/nicholl
       In a posting to m.w.s. he has also compared it with other sources
       of information:
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       "In my fourth printing (1980) edition of Cole/Haag, the settings
       are as follows for a screenplay without scene numbers:
       14 picas (1.4") scene headings, description.
       28 picas (2.8") dialogue begins.
       35 picas (3.5") parenthetical begins.
       41 picas (4.1") character name.
       51 picas (5.1") parenthetical cut off.
       56 picas (5.6") dialogue cut off.
       76 picas (7.6") description cut off.
       
       In the WGAe Professional Writers Teleplay/Screenplay Formats (1970)
       handbook, the settings are:
       20 picas (2.0") scene headings, description.
       30 picas (3.0") dialogue begins.
       35 picas (3.5") parenthetical begins.
       40 picas (4.0") character name.
       not listed --      parenthetical cut off.
       not listed --     dialogue cut off.
       75 picas (7.5") description cut off.
       [This handbook does include a printing error, corrected with an
       inserted slip of paper, that seems to indicate that left
       description margins should be at 1.5".]
       
       Rick Reichman's Formatting Your Screenplay (1992) has the following
       settings:
       14 picas (1.4") scene headings, description.
       28 picas (2.8") dialogue begins.
       35 picas (3.5") parenthetical begins.
       41 picas (4.1") character name.
       [couldn't find it] parenthetical cut off.
       56 or 58 picas (5.6/5.8") dialogue cut off.
       71 picas (7.1") description cut off.
       
       On the Nicholl page of the Academy's Web site, the formatting guide
       (which I wrote) lists these settings:
       1.5"          scene headings, description.
       3.0"          dialogue begins.
       3.7"          parenthetical begins.
       4.2"          character name.
       5.2"          parenthetical cut off.
       6.0"         dialogue cut off (with a 3-4 character gutter).
       7.5"         description cut off.
       
       I agree that slight differences finally don't matter.  A character
       here or there just isn't discernible. I think the original intent
       of the format when first established with the full-blown arrival of
       the studio system and sound films in the 1930s was to have pages
       appear to be symmetrical." (GB)
       
5.6    SCREENPLAY COVERS
       The writer's submission draft should be bound with a cover of
       lightweight card stock, which is not the same as heavyweight paper
       stock. Color is not crucial but most opinions support a pale color,
       or white. Any good copy shop should provide card stock for sale by
       the sheet. It can also be purchased in packs at many office supply
       sources. 
           The wording in some screenwriting books seems to advise putting
       screenplay titles on this binding cover. But by far, most m.w.s.
       users stated one of two opinions: 1) screenplay covers should
       definitely be blank, or 2) at best, nothing is gained by putting
       any information on the cover.
           Virtually all users agreed that the script should include a
       title page, sometimes called a fly page, containing the title,
       author's name and other information. The choice of "other
       information" is a separate discussion.
       
       From: (e-mail address deleted) (Bob Miller)
       "The title, author and contact info goes on a 20-lb. sheet of paper
       so it can run through a copying machine with the rest of the
       script. The heavy cardstock cover is left blank. ... I doubt anyone
       will get uptight if you title your cover, but it's just as often
       left blank."
       
       From: (e-mail address deleted) (JoannKB)
       "Any time you send your script to any producer, agent, studio,
       etc., you have reason to believe your script is going to be
       xeroxed. The vast majority of people you send your script to will
       send it to a reader to be covered, and most companies will give the
       reader a xerox copy so they can lose it and don't have to return
       it."
       
       From: (e-mail address deleted) (WriteTV)
       "Every agency I've ever been with has used their own custom-printed
       covers...The script title, my name and my agent's name/phone number
       are on the title page INSIDE the cover. That way, an exec or
       anybody needing to make a copy can just take the covers off -- if
       all that were on the cover, that information would be lost."
       
       From: (e-mail address deleted)
       "If I were trying to break in I would use plain white card stock
       with nothing printed on it.  Every prodco I know takes a black
       Sharpie pen and prints the title along the spine so they can see it
       when it's on the shelf.  Putting the title on the cover is a waste
       of time."

5.7    BINDING THE SCREENPLAY

5.7.1     THREE HOLES
           Screenplay pages, title pages, and cover stock should have
          three holes punched along the left margin, at positions that are
          standard for North American three-ring binders. 

5.7.2     TWO BRADS
           The entire screenplay, with covers, is then bound together
          using brass paper fasteners. Among film and TV writers, and
          virtually nowhere else, these fasteners are referred to as
          "brads." A brad has a round head and two "legs" that go straight
          through the punched hole, and are then spread out and flattened
          on the back side of the script to tighten the pages together.
          (Users who are unsure what is being described will find
          illustrations at the web addresses listed below.) Wordsmiths
          take note that the bendable legs on a brad may also be referred
          to as shanks, tangs, or prongs.
            
          The topic of binding scripts gets an extraordinary amount of
          discussion. Although the paper has three holes, the consensus
          among Hollywood insiders in m.w.s. leans toward the use of only
          two brads for binding, although there are quite a few users of
          the three-brad school of thought. Why should this matter? Nobody
          has ever provided an answer that satisfies everybody. It remains
          one of the mysteries of filmmaking. If nothing else, using only
          two brads means 1/3 less expense for the writer.
            
          Although it is possible that your script will be disassembled
          and photocopied, it is also possible that your original
          submission copy will be read before copies are made. So it is
          important to bind the script tightly, and to do so in a way that
          will not cut the hands of people handling the script. That makes
          the choice of brad, and method of use, somewhat important.

5.7.2.1   CHOOSING THE RIGHT KIND OF BRAD
           Not all brads are created equal. Some are sturdy and
          smooth-edged, while others are flimsy and sharp. Some have large
          heads that cover the punched hole, while others have heads small
          enough to slip through.
            
           Several users combined their research efforts to provide the
          following information for writers in search of higher-quality
          brads. One question was whether a "brass-plated" brad could do
          the job as well as solid brass. Another question was whether all
          ACCO branded brads were equal (ACCO is the most prevalent brand
          found in typical American office supply stores). After much
          research and discussion, users concluded that ACCO stock #71705
          is brass plated. ACCO #71505 is solid brass, and is preferable
          to most users who reported a preference (both are size #5). When
          shopping, note the confusing similarity in the stock numbers.
            
          Brian Anderson (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
           The difference between the brads is not just the material,
          it's also the dimensions of the tangs.  The tangs on solid brass
          brads are 50% thicker (0.5mm vs 0.25mm), and 33% wider (5mm vs
          3.75mm), giving them over two and a half times the bulk of the
          brass plated tangs.  And the huge advantage in bulk is made even
          greater by the fact that solid brass brads are also made of much
          stiffer material.
           The way I read scripts loosens brass plated brads most of the
          time. . . Some people use brass plated brads and say they've
          never had any problems, so I don't want to make more out of this
          than it really is. But I've read about 500 spec scripts, and
          have had to stop reading a number of times to replace a failing
          brad, so I don't want to take any chances with my own work."

5.7.2.2   BRAD SIZES
           Brad size #5 is 1-1/4" long - a common length for screenplays.
          For longer scripts (over 120 pages) one can use size #6 (1-1/2")
          brads. Shorter brads (2, 3 or 4) would be appropriate for TV
          scripts and other shorter documents. ACCO stock numbers seem to
          run in sequence starting from the third digit.
            
          Lynn Tucker (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
           "Before me sit a box of Acco #2 SOLID BRASS fasteners, and a
          box of Acco #3 SOLID BRASS fasteners. The stock #'s on the boxes
          are 71502 and 71503, respectively."
            
          There are only a few other brands to choose from, and m.w.s.
          users were able to report firm conclusions about only one, made
          by Labelon/Noesting.
            
          Ken Wheat (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
           "I like the 'Noesting' brand.  Solid brass.  Their #5 has that
          1-1/4" shank. 'Made in the U.S.A.' and  'Millions Daily,'
          proclaims the box proudly! Man!  That's a whole lotta scripts
          happening out there!

5.7.2.3   BUYING BRADS
          Once the group had determined the correct stock numbers for
          ACCO, users reported being able to purchase them fairly easily
          either in local stores, by mail order, or by special order from
          the larger American office supply chains. Other sources:
            
          Bill Blum (e-mail address deleted) mentioned that "The New York
          Screenwriter" had a mail order service for Labelon/Noesting
          brads, and other items. The web page is at
          http://www.nyscreenwriter.com/script_supplies.htm  Note that
          several m.w.s. users in the UK have successfully placed and
          received international orders from this source.
            
          Iliya Gontmakher (e-mail address deleted) provided a lead to
          "Enterprise of Hollywood" which offers ACCO brads and other
          items, at http://www.enterpriseprinters.com
          (Look under the "Hard to Find" category at that site.)
            
          Bill "The Judge" Quick (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
          "I just ordered and received a box of 100 solid brass 1.5 inch
          ACCO fasteners over the net from Alko Office Supply in Berkeley,
          CA. The URL is  http://www.alkos.com  Total cost including
          shipping was 11.77.  They delivered within three days.  The
          stock number was: ACC71506, the description 'Fastener Solid
          Brass 1.5'."

5.7.2.4   INSTALLING BRADS
          Hand-bending the prongs may not be enough to keep them flat.
          What makes the brad effective is when a serious 90-degree hard
          right angle is bent into the metal of each prong with some
          permanency. This is usually done with a hammer or rubber mallet,
          although other methods are reported below.
            
          Find a very hard (and clean) surface *beneath* the script when
          you set it up for whacking. Get your brads in place, bend the
          legs/prongs into position as tightly as possible by hand, set it
          down, and give the head of each brad one controlled but serious
          whack with the hammer or mallet. Try to hit it straight and
          true. (Some people place the script with the brad heads beneath,
          and strike the prongs instead. Do what works for you.)
            
          Some people use washers, which -- by virtue of having a small,
          rectangular slot -- might tend to provide a firmer edge for the
          creation of that hard right angle in the prongs, as mentioned
          above. The most important place for washers is the BOTTOM of the
          script, i.e. the side where the prongs come out. The prongs go
          through the slot in the washer before being bent flat. Since a
          proper brad (fastener) should have a large head on it, a washer
          on the top (front) side of the script should not be needed.
            
          In the interest of thoroughness, here are user testimonials for
          various methods of installing brads. 
            
          Steven Weller  (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
          "Me, I use the rubber-mallet method.  Got mine for 99 cents at
          the ubiquitous 99 Cents Only store, no complaints. But keep in
          mind that often, when a script comes back to you with looser
          binding than when you sent it out, it's because the script has
          been disassembled by whomever had it - usually for copying.  So
          if a prodco or agent or whomever sends it back loose, don't
          immediately blame the brads."
            
          Brian Anderson (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
           ". . . I think the psychological benefits of this cannot be
          overstressed.  For me, hammering brads is as ritualistic as
          anything the Aztecs ever did, carried out on the sacred floor of
          my garage. The ceremonial clubbing is a rite of passage for my
          screenplays, and is the moment where I officially detach myself
          emotionally from my work.  I used to use a claw hammer
          (Craftsman, 16 oz, Y2K compliant), but as Bernice commented, it
          distorts the natural convex shape of the brad head, flattening
          it and revealing the unsightly structure beneath.  So I switched
          to a rubber mallet (NATO milspec, cholesterol free), and I get
          that same tight binding while doing minimal damage to the brad
          heads. . .
           I use only ACCO solid brass #5 brads (part number 71505, 1.25"
          long, keep away from children), and ACCO #2 brass washers (part
          number 71511, 100 per box, batteries not included).  I have
          never had the brads loosen during circulation.  If the reader
          curls the front around to the back as he reads (as I often do),
          brass plated brads, even when hammered, loosen up as the reader
          nears the end of the script."
            
          Calix (e-mail address deleted) wrote: "Put the brad in the hole.
          Turn the script over so the head is down on the desk and the
          prongs are sticking straight up, displaying their excitement at
          being included in your brilliant submission.
              Take a stiff flat metal object -- I usually use a pair of
          scissors since they're handy.
             Lay the scissors blade flat on the back of your script.
          * * The other one is open and out of the way.
             Slide the scissors blade so that the cutting edge is up
          against the flat of the brad prong.
             Fold the brad prong down over the scissors blade. The
          scissors blade is now between the brad prong and the script, and
          the brad prong is almost perfectly in position for submission.
             Hold the tip of the bent brad blade flat on the script with a
          free finger, the scissors blade still in place underneath it.
             Give the scissors a little twist so that the sharp part of
          the blade lifts up while the back side of the blade presses down
          into the script.  This will put a crease in the brad at a 90
          degree angle, making it lie perfectly flat on the script when
          you pull it out.
             Do the same thing for the other leg of the brad. 
             Then do the same thing for the other brad.
             * this explanation is much longer than the actual process.  I
          figure it takes me about ten seconds to do both of the brads in
          the script, which admittedly is probably slower than two smacks
          with a mallet. Also I'm being as careful and detailed as
          possible to make sure that I communicate effectively, not to
          offend.
             ** This would be the same way as if you just laid the
          scissors down on the script and let gravity do its thing, so
          that the handles are parallel with the script and the floor, 90
          degrees off from how you'd hold them to cut the script in half."
            
          Andrea Bacharach (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
          "A friend uses washers...bashes the backs down then tapes over
          them with masking tape. Well, he won at Austin one year so I
          guess it works.  The first thing we do at a reading is rip the
          damn brads out and put the scripts into 3-hole binders so the
          actors are comfortable. Then we reassemble with brads and
          exchange autographs after the show. Lots of fun!!!" 
            
          DavePCI (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
          ". . . I use a pair of needle nose pliers. I put the brad
          through the hole and then clamp onto one leg just inside the
          hole. A simple 90 degree turn and boom...tight brads. If you
          become adept at it, you can even get the brad legs perfectly in
          line... very impressive and people notice." 
            
          Bill Blum (e-mail address deleted) wrote:
          "I keep a high quality (read expensive) screwdriver on my desk.
          The script in placed face-down, two brads are inserted from the
          bottom and washers slid down their shafts which are then bent
          sideways beyond the horizontal (this may require a partial
          lifting of the inverted script). Placed back on the desk (use a
          pad to prevent damage to the desk), the screwdriver handle is
          slammed down first on the middle of the brad, then on each side.
          Them suckers never move until I tell them."

5.7.3  DON'T "SCREW" AROUND
        Users now and then inquire about a "screwpost" binding device
       often called "Chicago Screws." Although there are seemingly
       common-sense reasons to use such devices, they are not the
       "industry standard" and they do provide some potential
       inconvenience for some readers. The consensus among the great
       majority of users with opinions on the matter was to avoid them,
       and stick with brads. So, to keep matters clear, this document will
       not link to any illustrations of them.

5.7.4  FORMAT AND PRESENTATION OVERVIEW: A READER COMMENTS

       Smilin' Ted (e-mail address deleted) has worked extensively as a reader 
       for Hollywood production entities. Readers are often the front line
       "defense" that a spec screenplay must pass before it will be
       considered. He offered the following general advice on script
       presentation. (NOTE: numbering in the next section comes from Ted's
       newsgroup post and is not part of the FAQ outline structure).

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       "What follows is my personal (but not necessarily complete) list of
       what's a really bad format screw-up, and what is a trivial one. The
       basis for the list is more years than I care to admit working as a
       free-lance script reader.
       
       MAJOR ISSUES (in no particular order):
       
       1. Margins -- this affects page count, and thus, the length of your
       movie. A reader may not notice wonky margins immediately, but he is
       sure to notice them within ten or twenty pages, and he will be
       pissed... particularly because he is often  paid by the script, and
       a script with excessively wide margins has automatically reduced
       his per-hour rate, as well as branding the author an amateur who
       cannot edit himself.
       
       2. Font -- Courier 12. Nothing else, period. Doesn't matter how
       nice-looking your favorite font is, don't use it. First, because
       this will once again affect page count. Second, because it is the
       second most visible way to announce that you don't know what you're
       doing. After a day of reading Courier 12, anything else sticks out
       like a sore thumb, and is usually harder to read.
       
       3. Page Count -- No more than 120 pages. Preferably less, say
       101-115. Using the famous page-a-minute rule of thumb, 120 pages
       equals a two-hour movie. Yes, tatteleh, I KNOW that "Titanic" is
       longer. When you get to be an A-list director like James Cameron,
       you also can do longer scripts. Until then....
       
       4. Binding and paper -- 8.5x11".  White. Bound with two (or three
       brads). Nothing else. I've gotten stuff in three-ring binders,
       velo-bound, comb-bound, with Chicago screws, even bound as a
       hardcover book...this is the first, most obvious way to announce
       that you don't know what you're doing.
       
       5. "Sloppiness" -- Bad grammar, bad spelling, bad punctuation. One
       or two typos are trivial. But consistent mistakes are guaranteed to
       arouse the contempt of the reader (who is a college graduate and
       usually a liberal arts major). Use a spellchecker. If your grammar
       and spelling are not the best, admit it to yourself and hire a
       proof-reader. And even ONE mistake is a major error, if it's on the
       first page.
       
       6. Bad descriptions -- Action descriptions that include things that
       shouldn't be there:
            A. Camera directions: Leave that "Smash cut to a trucking pan
       of Harry's POV" to the director.
            B. Overly detailed description: I don't need to know the color
       scheme of Louise's business ensemble, and how it coordinates with
       her office furnishings. Really.
            C. Specifying story elements that are not in your control --
       like the songs in your soundtrack, or the actor for a particular
       role, or a location ("This film takes place at Harvard. I've
       included maps...."). It's not in the public domain, you can't
       guarantee the rights, it ain't your job, and it's too damn
       specific. Your story should be able to stand alone.
            D. Stuff I can't see on the screen: Don't tell me in the
       description that Joe has just blown up at Karen because when he was
       a kid, his mother teased him the same way...if the audience won't
       see it  on the screen, then it is irrelevant. Exceptions can be
       made, **IF** the exception is just an occasional sentence to
       indicate character's interior mood or line reading. But THIS HAS TO
       BE USED VERY, VERY CAREFULLY. Fire is your friend, but if you are
       careless, it will burn you.
       
       All of these things (except for C) make the script harder to read,
       and slow the reader down, once again cutting into his hourly rate.
       
       MINOR ISSUES
       
       1. **Number of brads** -- I rarely even notice if a script has two
       or three brads. The proper number is two, though.
       
       2. Card stock cover or no -- The issue that generated this post.
       Once again, I get them both ways. Often, the ones with card-stock
       covers come from the authors or their agents; the ones without
       often come from companies that are somehow attached to the project.
       
       3. "Continued"s and "More"s at the ends of pages -- I can't tell
       you the rules of these things, because I don't even notice them
       when I read.
       
       4. Typos -- There will always be two or three in every script. But
       there shouldn't be any more than that, and they most especially
       should not be on the first ten or the last two pages. Then it
       becomes sloppiness (see above).
       
       FINAL WORDS: Anyone here can point to some script that was produced
       that broke these rules (particularly the length rule). But almost
       without exception, these were scripts by writers who were already
       members of the establishment, who already have broken through. This
       post talks about the rules for SAMPLE SCRIPTS, and if you're
       uncertain about these rules (or considering breaking them) then you
       are probably writing a sample script.  Break the rules if you want.
       No skin off my nose. Just expect the already low chances of success
       for that script to fall even closer to zero." (ST)
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